A burning sensation
A Burning SensationWe watch time go byAs if it were a fire-engineGoing to a fireBurning inside us. toro
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Nice piece, my only regret is that it wasn't longer. I thoroughly enjoyed this short verse. God bless, TimThe Poetry Factory ~The Creative Write...Read More
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Sometimes time passes too quickly for our liking. Nicely described.I'm going to move this to the short verse forum because I think it fits there...
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Very succinct. I like how you have described time Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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Time speeds by, burns, consumes. An excellent poem that answers the question I ask myself more and more these days, "Where does the time go?"Wanda
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this is great!!..i think Time is the only 'perfect' thing...it never changes..just goes along doing what its done from its beginning..always moving forward, never back, never looking behind with...
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Good choice for a bump up, Val. Thanks! And it harm none, do thy will. Blessed Be!
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I like the thought of time likened to a burning flame consuming our life. Nicely done!
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